Posted by Ashes in the Snow Mine may not be uploaded on flickr, but i know there are some pics of me floating around on a phone or two haha. But yea, I definitely respect her wishes. |
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Posted by Reverend Hearse
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Posted by Axle May I make some some suggestions on how to improve these images? Sure, great, let's go. Before you read further, let me just say that the following is my opinion and how I would shoot these particular scenes differently. Photo 1 - Have the camera facing head on, so that the railing cuts the frame diagonally, have the model leaning on the rail with both arms cross over it slight turn of course to show off curves, one light through an umbrella, to just soften her features, and give a nice warm glow. Photo 2 - place the model on the desk (in the background of your shot), probably laying down on her back, arched, similar pose to the 2nd photo that e-photog posted above your post, light from the inside, just off frame aimed down on the model add a softbox or for a more harsher, grunge look, a grid snoot, and then frame through the window, while the camera is outside. Photo 3 - Pose is decent, bring the arms in a little more, keep the camera where it is, but zoom in, this would be a perfect head & shoulders shot. Light with a single light using a grid snoot to focus the light directly on the model's face. |
Posted by Reverend Hearse That's all Greek to me , I shot those with a cheap point and shoot a few years back , I have a better camera , but I'm a car painter , nit a photographer ..... |
Posted by rob.i.am My bad. I was thinking this was the critique thread! Carry on. |
Posted by e-photog Since no one has posted in a while... A candle only experiment shot last week. Details: Aperture: F/2.5 Shutter: 1/15 ISO: 800 |
Posted by Axle May I make some some suggestions on how to improve these images? Sure, great, let's go. Before you read further, let me just say that the following is my opinion and how I would shoot these particular scenes differently. Photo 1 - Have the camera facing head on, so that the railing cuts the frame diagonally, have the model leaning on the rail with both arms cross over it slight turn of course to show off curves, one light through an umbrella, to just soften her features, and give a nice warm glow. Photo 2 - place the model on the desk (in the background of your shot), probably laying down on her back, arched, similar pose to the 2nd photo that e-photog posted above your post, light from the inside, just off frame aimed down on the model add a softbox or for a more harsher, grunge look, a grid snoot, and then frame through the window, while the camera is outside. Photo 3 - Pose is decent, bring the arms in a little more, keep the camera where it is, but zoom in, this would be a perfect head & shoulders shot. Light with a single light using a grid snoot to focus the light directly on the model's face. |
Posted by Ashes in the Snow I liiiiike... The second picture could have used some candle light in the foreground to light her up a bit in my opinion, but still good. |
Posted by Ashes in the Snow I liiiiike... The second picture could have used some candle light in the foreground to light her up a bit in my opinion, but still good. |
Posted by Ashes in the Snow You're a helluva lot nicer than I am |
Posted by Reverend Hearse i thought this was a photo thread, not a bash on the non photographer thread. i thought i made it pretty clear im not a photographer, just another explorer with a camera. i understood what he meant by framing the shots different , but past that , its like chineese. i read what the man said, its just that i dont have a 600+ camera and light setup, nor the required knowledge to use such equipment. i have a 200 canon . it does what i want it to do , and does it well. you need to fuck off if you have nothing positive to contribute... dick..... |
Posted by Reverend Hearse WASNT MY G/F JUST A FELLOW EXPLORER.... AND YOUR RIGHT ITS FOR PEOPLE WHO WANT TO BE SUPERIOR TO OTHERS WHILE RUNNING THEIR DICKSUCKERS, YES MAYBE I WOULD LIKE A HELPFUL EXPLANATION OF HOW MY CAMERA WORKS TO ACHEIVE DIFFERENT EFFECTS, BUT DID A ONE OF YOU DIPSHITS CONSIDER THAT? SNOPE , JUMPED RIGHT ONTO HOW SHITTY IT WAS, NO WONDER UER IS SUCH A SHITTY PLACE ANYMORE, TOO MANY SNOBBY ASS ELITIST PRICKS RUNNING AMOK... |
Posted by e-photog You can see the reflection of the 1 big candle I had on the floor to better light her head , but I didnt wanna move the little ones cause they'd started melting all over that shelf by this time. Some ended up dripping on her =P |
Posted by Reverend Hearse WASNT MY G/F JUST A FELLOW EXPLORER.... AND YOUR RIGHT ITS FOR PEOPLE WHO WANT TO BE SUPERIOR TO OTHERS WHILE RUNNING THEIR DICKSUCKERS, YES MAYBE I WOULD LIKE A HELPFUL EXPLANATION OF HOW MY CAMERA WORKS TO ACHEIVE DIFFERENT EFFECTS, BUT DID A ONE OF YOU DIPSHITS CONSIDER THAT? SNOPE , JUMPED RIGHT ONTO HOW SHITTY IT WAS, NO WONDER UER IS SUCH A SHITTY PLACE ANYMORE, TOO MANY SNOBBY ASS ELITIST PRICKS RUNNING AMOK... |
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