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Lasso
Location: Grand Rapids, MI Gender: Male Total Likes: 6 likes
| | | | Sexy in a Dark Creepy Building [NSFW] < on 1/29/2013 5:03 PM > | Reply with Quote
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[last edit 1/29/2013 5:20 PM by Lasso - edited 2 times]
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| Lasso
Location: Grand Rapids, MI Gender: Male Total Likes: 6 likes
| | | | Re: Sexy in a Dark Creepy Building [NSFW] < Reply # 1 on 2/4/2013 7:31 PM > | Reply with Quote
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| AnAppleSnail
Location: Charlotte, NC Gender: Male Total Likes: 49 likes
ALL the flashlights!
| | | | | Re: Sexy in a Dark Creepy Building [NSFW] < Reply # 2 on 2/4/2013 8:52 PM > | Reply with Quote
| | | Ok, I'll bite. About two of these really do show off her tattoos. Cold makes posing tough though, but it might be better to have used smaller clothes to show them better. It looks like she was okay topless but not nude, and that can work well. The first photo is a great face shot, but doesn't show a tattoo well. I'd suggest having her elbow higher, and part of the tattoo hidden (tease) behind her panties. #2, Shows tattoos well. For underwear pulls, don't you want a fluid finger hooking, instead of a claw sort of grabbing at the cloth? #3 Yes, smooth hooking like this. The gun shirt is a good choice here, but is the stairway? My eyes are drawn away from her towards the very strange wallpaper. #4, nipples are good. But isn't this a tattoo expo? None of these show her collarbone tattoo, and this would have been a great time (Shrugging the top down, perhaps). #5 seems like a bit more light from above would help see the thigh tattoo. But it's a good photo. #6 I can't escape the feeling that her hands are yearning for something to do. Hair toss, holding something, I'm not sure what. That's what I've got. The technical execution is pretty good, and your use of the flash is good. A thermos of hot water works wonders. I've used a 40 oz metal bottle with hot water, wrapped in a sock, for times like this. Careful blowing fuses in old houses... They like to burn down if you hurt their feelings.
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Location: Grand Rapids, MI Gender: Male Total Likes: 6 likes
| | | | Re: Sexy in a Dark Creepy Building [NSFW] < Reply # 4 on 2/5/2013 3:55 AM > | Reply with Quote
| | | Posted by AnAppleSnail Ok, I'll bite. About two of these really do show off her tattoos. Cold makes posing tough though, but it might be better to have used smaller clothes to show them better. It looks like she was okay topless but not nude, and that can work well. The first photo is a great face shot, but doesn't show a tattoo well. I'd suggest having her elbow higher, and part of the tattoo hidden (tease) behind her panties. #2, Shows tattoos well. For underwear pulls, don't you want a fluid finger hooking, instead of a claw sort of grabbing at the cloth? #3 Yes, smooth hooking like this. The gun shirt is a good choice here, but is the stairway? My eyes are drawn away from her towards the very strange wallpaper. #4, nipples are good. But isn't this a tattoo expo? None of these show her collarbone tattoo, and this would have been a great time (Shrugging the top down, perhaps). #5 seems like a bit more light from above would help see the thigh tattoo. But it's a good photo. #6 I can't escape the feeling that her hands are yearning for something to do. Hair toss, holding something, I'm not sure what. That's what I've got. The technical execution is pretty good, and your use of the flash is good. A thermos of hot water works wonders. I've used a 40 oz metal bottle with hot water, wrapped in a sock, for times like this. Careful blowing fuses in old houses... They like to burn down if you hurt their feelings.
| Thanks for the tips man! I didn't have the time to put in a ton of thought like what she's doing with her hands and such since I didn't want her to freeze. But now that you bring that stuff up it will be something I look for next time. The thermos is a good idea too. I appreciate the full critique I was bummed that no one was commenting lol. The photos weren't specifically for a tattoo expo, it was for a gig I was working on designing some posters/flyers/etc for a night club and the client wanted "a sexy tattoo'd girl".
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