The recently edited shots are flatter, colours less punchy. It works with the projector shot but the other 2 were better in the original post.
From the original post:
1 - Too busy and tightly framed. I would have zoomed out a bit, probably removed the dummy in the back and applied the rule of 3rds. I think the flowers in the front should be in focus too.
2 - Not a keeper, in my opinion. The use of flash and the underside of the benches on the left are doing nothing for me. Had I been there and absolutely wanted a shot of the pins, I would have moved them and staged a scene in a better spot.
3 - Sweet shot with the perspective and leading lines. However, the distortion and angle (looks a bit crooked to me) are taking away from it. I'd use Lens Correction, in Lr (pick Manual) or in Ps (pick Custom). I'd also kill a bit of the blue/purple tones from the floor so it's a bit more neutral.
4 - Not a keeper either. Framed too tight, too busy, subject is kinda lost in there.
5 - Interesting shot, liking the leading lines on the left but would have centred the graffiti vertically. I would have also aligned the graff to the right using the rule of 3rds and angled the shot a bit to take advantage of the wall on the left.
My opinion anyway, photography is pretty subjective.
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