Location: Toronto Gender: Male Total Likes: 150 likes
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Re: gasworks < Reply # 1 on 4/20/2010 2:20 PM > | Reply with Quote
I like the first one. Nicely framed, and I like the reds. Looks like you missed focus though. You seem to have nailed the bracelets...should try to focus on the eyes.
Second one doesn't do much for me. Again, I think you may have mis-focussed, as she looks a bit blurry. Overall, not sure what to really focus on in this pic.
Keep at it though. Looking forward to seeing more.
Location: All Around Michigan Gender: Male Total Likes: 0 likes
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Re: gasworks < Reply # 3 on 4/20/2010 3:05 PM > | Reply with Quote
I agree with the comments on #1 and the focus on #2. But as a whole I personally like #2 - there is a lot going on, but I think it works. Nice job overall.