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Oryx 


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Your poetry
< on 3/1/2011 2:41 AM >
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I sit here amongst the breeze
Watching time gently flow
Flocks of thoughts
Ripples of emotion
I observe patiently





Sharing time




Yield 


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Re: Your poetry
< Reply # 1 on 3/1/2011 7:13 AM >
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I'm writing a brand new one just for this I'm so excited.




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HerbLaur 

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Re: Your poetry
< Reply # 2 on 3/2/2011 6:53 AM >
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Some time late at night
Look at yourself in wonder
And be glad you're you




I’m quite positive that you’ve slept with someone uglier than me, and I’m sure I’ve slept with someone hotter than you. So let’s just call it a draw.
thatwhichisi 


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Re: Your poetry
< Reply # 3 on 3/8/2011 11:27 PM >
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dont know much about layouts and rules.. just that i like to mess with words in the mouth. so..

prose i suppose...

and he sits there.
there and no where else,
smiling in his half-slit grin looking at the floor.

'and how your travels drag you, for now you rest so stiff'
and the milk white eyes reply, softly as he shifts.





HerbLaur 

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< Reply # 4 on 3/9/2011 8:06 PM >
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I am not the type
Of person that ever could
Tell you I need you




I’m quite positive that you’ve slept with someone uglier than me, and I’m sure I’ve slept with someone hotter than you. So let’s just call it a draw.
Oryx 


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Re: Your poetry
< Reply # 5 on 3/12/2011 8:02 PM >
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Laur always inspires me to write more haikus


The rain falls harder
The flower grows from the seed
But it will not bloom




HerbLaur 

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Re: Your poetry
< Reply # 6 on 3/13/2011 8:07 PM >
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Single and thirty
Is not how I imagined
My mid-life crisis




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Re: Your poetry
< Reply # 7 on 3/17/2011 11:13 AM >
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My new one is shit so I edited an old one. Hope somebody likes it

Envy

I laugh while you cry
Anticipating when you’ll die
I soundly linger while you drift away
I do my job,
I do it well.
I take your soul,
bound to hell
I have no words,
I have no hope
I have no light
I ignore your cries,
your sighs,
your plight
I drag you under,
pull you down
and yet I feel dismay
for while you lived
your life in sin
you have no regrets
each day was to the fullest
your destiny was met
While you burn and writhe in hell,
the message I cannot give;
if I could again, I'd follow you
and this time truly live




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Re: Your poetry
< Reply # 8 on 3/17/2011 11:39 AM >
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I was looking for some poetry from back in the day. I saw this one. I wrote it in college. Oddly, it kinda pumps me up.

Nude Day!



You don’t have to be beautiful,

Thin

Voluptuous

Blonde

Tan

Or Perfect.

But love your body.

Get down to the bare basics even if society tells you likewise.

Show off those love handles,

Cellulite,

And stretch marks.

Love them like you love food, because you can’t live without either.

Everyone!

Be nude!

Be proud!

Don’t let Cosmo tell you that your figure, in it’s entirety, is hideous because your lovers know better.

Dance,

Sing,

Laugh,

But don’t hide it, any of it.
Rejoice, and celebrate your God given

Fat thighs,

Big hips,

Small feet,

And flat chests.

But don’t keep it to yourself, tell everyone they too are genetic works of art.

Not comfortable?

Today is the day to start.

Strip down and run naked!

But don’t forget the sunscreen…




"Steve, I was going to bed, I'm going to be on, and I have to throw com dot. Manning and Sean, slash, Sandra come into my name is John thousand anytime doctor that it maybe she'll come. Maybe she want. I think this please. I will probably show up when you are going to be there and calling and they are people okay alright. Bye bye."
thatwhichisi 


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< Reply # 9 on 3/17/2011 12:55 PM >
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hehe, well though i would not prefer to run around naked, good message.
perhaps if everyone did so constantly and it wasnt such a rush for people to see and do, it would feel ok.




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< Reply # 10 on 3/17/2011 9:56 PM >
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Posted by thatwhichisi
hehe, well though i would not prefer to run around naked, good message.
perhaps if everyone did so constantly and it wasnt such a rush for people to see and do, it would feel ok.


I am pretty much naked at all times.




"Steve, I was going to bed, I'm going to be on, and I have to throw com dot. Manning and Sean, slash, Sandra come into my name is John thousand anytime doctor that it maybe she'll come. Maybe she want. I think this please. I will probably show up when you are going to be there and calling and they are people okay alright. Bye bye."
HerbLaur 

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Re: Your poetry
< Reply # 11 on 4/25/2011 3:11 PM >
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Sitting
Drinking coffee
Looking out a window at a tree
Weeping cherry
Planted to honor my mother
I wonder now, sometimes
Who I would be
If I hadn't had to try
So very very hard
To not be
Her

I do wonder though
If she
Would have learned
To like me
As much as I
Now do
And if she
Could ever have forgiven me
The way I've forgiven her

Thanks mommy
You made me me
I made it to 30.




I’m quite positive that you’ve slept with someone uglier than me, and I’m sure I’ve slept with someone hotter than you. So let’s just call it a draw.
Yield 


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< Reply # 12 on 4/25/2011 4:26 PM >
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Posted by HerbLaur
*beautiful words*


Happy birthday beautiful, and thanks for making me cry this Monday afternoon.
<69





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Oryx 


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< Reply # 13 on 4/27/2011 10:58 PM >
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Laur has beautiful words indeed. I'm glad this board is still clinging to life!


I want to run off
Wander into my mind
Stare at the sky
Float away into a daze
And forget where I am
For a while



and now for some sappy shit


I should have told you
What my heart really meant
I adore you
But I couldn't
I don't know why
So it is
How it is
And I'm left here
In the past




Yield 


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< Reply # 14 on 5/11/2011 2:55 AM >
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Sappy shit all around!


If the writing were to impress
Unto my skin it would
So simply break the bane of bare
A single tear for pain, or less
The fine point dipped and dipped again
One word eternally where there was none before
Amore




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HerbLaur 

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< Reply # 15 on 5/13/2011 1:53 AM >
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Hanging on a fence
A scarf, alone, forgotten
Someone wore you once.




I’m quite positive that you’ve slept with someone uglier than me, and I’m sure I’ve slept with someone hotter than you. So let’s just call it a draw.
Yield 


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< Reply # 16 on 5/27/2011 1:40 AM >
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I won't judge you here
Before your worst enemy
Shatter the mirror




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Oryx 


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< Reply # 17 on 5/31/2011 10:53 PM >
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// I suppose you deserve some sort of recognition

{ I'm sure deep down, hidden, & locked away
forgotten, buried, & ignored
(there lies something within
you that resembles a decent
human being) }

// So here it is




Oryx 


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< Reply # 18 on 5/31/2011 10:55 PM >
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Art is a cynical bastard

It seems as though art freely allows
the expression of negative emotion
yet forgets the other end of the spectrum
perhaps I have not achieved a higher state of being
for I cant think of anything nice to say




HerbLaur 

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< Reply # 19 on 6/4/2011 1:01 AM >
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You were the wind then
Swirling in my mind and all
Over my body.




I’m quite positive that you’ve slept with someone uglier than me, and I’m sure I’ve slept with someone hotter than you. So let’s just call it a draw.
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